Choices

Lol, yes I am going to say something about the hair again, lol.

I must say I can see your technique is busy getting there. I'll just go through my own faves and will note you with a good hair brush a bit later.

I only have two critiques here. Firstly, the part of her hair right next to her face on the left side, it's too light. Always start with your darkest shade, do the whole base form of the hair with that color. I usually do another 4 layers after that. I gradually lighten the shade of hair, and with every shade I go lighter, I make the brush smaller. At the end I just take the darkest shade with the smallest brush and do the dark bits' ends...

And then just check, the foot infront, underneath the toes just add some close range shadows, seems semi like it's floating lol.

Hope this helps love!!!